Thursday, February 6, 2014

Chapter 23 - This is the end!

So the ending of the story doesn't seem to be enough for everyone. I really enjoyed how everything kind of ties together, using some of the earliest transmitted memories of snow, the sled, the hill, etc. If you DID like it, why do you think it worked well? If you DID NOT like it, how would change the ending to make it more satisfying for you?
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  1. Ms. Fahey's studentsFebruary 6, 2014 at 5:52 PM

    Well I didn't really like it because the description was really vivid. So, now I'm not sure if Jonas is dead or alive. I would probably change it by making him see another community that is exactly like the world we live in when he gets to the top of the hill. -Andrew

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  2. Jeff B.February 9, 2014 at 5:37 PM

    I liked it because of how in the end he noticed snow and it was possibly Christmas in Elsewhere. Also I loved Gabriel throughout the whole story and I'm glad he lived. :P

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